I really like the colours in this photo, the focus on the bird on the twig's face and the soft lines in the background, I assume that that was made by ferns?
This is going to sound strange, but I love your watermark, it works perfectly, deterring someone from stealing your image without detracting from the image it self.
I wish that everything in the image was sharp, I think that would have made the image really stand out. I''m not sure what your lens is capable of, if it was possible, you could have opened your aperture further and that would have allowed you to make your shutter speed faster, but I understand if that wasn't possible. It would have been really amazing if you had all those lovely wing feathers in focus, though.
The left hand corner is a little dark.
I feel that the birds could be just slightly higher in the frame.
This is a fantactic capture, thank you for sharing! I appreciate that you managed to capture such moment. The wings of the right bird are a bit blurry, but it adds to the dynamics of the photo and as the left bird is very sharp, I do not count it as a negative. Composition is great and I apprecite quite interesting background - it seems like there were some ornaments in the green field. I would only advice you to make the colours more vivid, as it would make the photo more interesting bit more contrast might be ok too.
Very nice photo!
(sorry for grammer mistakes, I am incredibly sleepy )
This is going to sound strange, but I love your watermark, it works perfectly, deterring someone from stealing your image without detracting from the image it self.
I wish that everything in the image was sharp, I think that would have made the image really stand out. I''m not sure what your lens is capable of, if it was possible, you could have opened your aperture further and that would have allowed you to make your shutter speed faster, but I understand if that wasn't possible. It would have been really amazing if you had all those lovely wing feathers in focus, though.
The left hand corner is a little dark.
I feel that the birds could be just slightly higher in the frame.
Very nice photo!
(sorry for grammer mistakes, I am incredibly sleepy
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